Sunday, March 6, 2011

La Mexicana

    La Mexicana is a small, unassuming brick building across from a gas station on the corner of Bryant and Portage. This humble building houses three distinct areas. Upon entering, customers are greeted with the first section of the market, fresh produce and rows upon rows of Hispanic food staples. Horchata, Mole, hot sauces, a whole section of bagged spices and a whole deli counter filled with meats are some of the bountiful selections to be explored here.
     Straight back into the market is the second area, the ice cream coolers. La Mexicana offers homemade ice cream and ice cream bars in plenty of interesting flavors. Guava, avocado, chocolate, and egg nog are just a few of the diverse selection. Diners looking for a frozen treat in the cold months are out of luck. The ice cream section is closed during the winter.
     Secluded in the back of La Mexicana is the venue's true treat; the restaurant. The cash register and the grill sit behind a glass sneeze guard in full view of the seating area. Diners looking to sit down and eat have their choice of heavy wooden tables with a few chairs around each, or three plastic booths lining the walls.
The Spanish and English menu posted on the wall is sparse: burritos, fajitas, tortas, tacos, with your choice of steak, pork, chicken, or chorizo. The prices at La Mexicana are very low and reasonable: no more than $7 for any of the main dishes. Drinks from the refrigerator are $1.50 and can be opened at the bottle opener attached to the wall.
     The burrito is perhaps the most filling item on the menu. It's At least four inches in diameter and absolutely packed with whatever meat you order, beans, sour cream, rice, avocado, lettuce, tomatoes and onions. The soft tortilla is wrapped in tin foil and thin paper to make the nonetheless messy process of eating the burrito easier. But don't take these for granted, they still have a habit of dribbling lettuce and beans down your arm or up your sleeve if you aren't careful. The chicken Burrito is a good starting point. No extraordinary flavors but all the different fillings work well together and create a well-textured meal and a half. The only negative in the burrito is the beans. It's hard to get beans to taste like anything but beans, but La Mexicana doesn't seem to want to push their refried beans beyond just mediocre. I'd expect more attention to be given to this staple but the restaurant dissapoints.
     Consider Tortas for a smaller but no less interesting meal. Tortas are a “Mexican Sub” according to the menu. They are avocado, lettuce, tomato, onions, sour cream, and the meat of your coice pressed together between two halves of what looks like a Mexican kaiser roll. Pork works well in these. The smoky and fatty chunks of pork, cut from the cooking leg right in front of you, compliment the crunchy lettuce and the crispy roll extremely well. Again, these come wrapped in foil and paper to aid in clean eating but like the burritos, messiness is unavoidable.
     The steak in the fajitas is some of the best I've had. Beautifully marinated and chewy to the point of ecstasy, their juices release in the mouth with a burst of flavor. The fajita plate comes with lettuce, rice, steak, avocado, grilled peppers and onions, and corn tortillas to wrap everything up in. Make sure to eat these fast as the corn tortillas become grainy and dry as they cool.
An easily overlooked aspect of the restaurant are the sauce trays. Four different sauces, each spicier than the last provide the kick and punch to the entrees. The four sauces are red, vibrant orange, chunky green and smoother green and are increasingly spicy in that order. Make sure to ask for some small cups to spoon the sauces into.
     The drinks at La Mexicana also deserve a special mention of their own. There are no soda fountains or aluminum cans of Coke to be found here. The restaurant's refrigerator is stocked with glass bottles of Squirt, Sprite, and some more eclectic Hispanic specialties. There's “Boing,” an uncarbonated mango beverage that's a little watery, and “Schin Guarana,” a carbonated canned beverage with an unidentifiable pseudo-fruit flavor. Finally, there are a multitude of flavors of “Jarritos,” a very popular Mexican soft drink. I'd recommend the orange Jarritos. It's refreshing and tangy without being too overwhelming. There's no corn syrup to be found in any of La Mexicana's drinks.
     Vegetarians looking for a delicious Mexican meal may find themselves out of luck at La Mexicana. Most of the menu items are only offered with meat. Non meat eaters may find themselves having to settle for a burrito with extra beans instead of any hardier or more complex meal.
     The atmosphere at La Mexicana is a familiar, humble one. The dining room is ringed with painted frescos of Mexican pueblos. Two TVs are tuned in to Spanish soap operas or the news. The sizzling of the meat on the grill mixes with the Spanish from the television for an energetic and vibrant dining experience. The eating area isn't very attractive in the way one might expect from a more upscale restaurant. There are few decorations apart from the painted walls. But the unassuming decor works. One doesn't come to the back of a Hispanic market looking for the atmosphere and decor of Food Dance.
     This atmosphere might be off-putting for some however. Besides the noise and the humble appearance, Spanish is above all the language of conversation throughout the entire market. The person taking orders speaks English, as do many of the employees and the menus are all in both English and Spanish, but the overall feeling of the market and clientele is Hispanic and might be alienating for some.
    La Mexicana feels very truthful. They don't try to hide their culinary skill under paint and reservations. They let their affordably priced, hearty fare stand for what it is, lovingly cooked, “traditional”, and above all else, delicious Mexican food.

11 comments:

  1. Max, this was a delightful read and I really think you did La Mexicana justice. You did a good job slipping into the 'reviewer voice,' making sure not to refer to yourself as 'I' nor the reader as 'you' (when at all possible), all without getting repetitive or strange. This makes your review feel dependable and serves your reader very well. I loved the details in this piece--the corn syrup-free soda, the bottle opener on the wall, the ice cream flavors (though sadly unavailable in winter), the "dribbling lettuce and beans [that spill] down your arm or up your sleeve if you aren't careful."

    I think it was great that you recognized that vegetarians will find it difficult to find variety at La Mexicana, and that the atmosphere may be off-putting for some. This attention to your reader makes it feel like you're really writing for your audience (as it should be!). That being said, I wondered whether you were writing to the college crowd (by way of The Index), or perhaps the greater Kalamazoo community (through the Gazette, for example), or some other group entirely.

    Had I not shared this meal with you, I would certainly be drawn toward visiting La Mexicana as a result of your review, Max (and I will surely be visiting again).

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  2. Max,
    I really enjoyed reading your review. I think it's straight-forward and honest, and you do a nice job of highlighting both the positive and negative qualities of your meal. You did a nice job providing descriptions for your readers and gave us a good idea of what to order should we choose to visit this restaurant. I think you can take these descriptions farther, however. There are a few cases where you tell us, instead of show us, and I think you could tighten that up a bit. For example, when you rave about the steak fajitas, perhaps you could give us a more concrete example of what eating them is like. When you say "chewy to the point of ecstasy," for example, I'm not really sure what that means.
    Overall, nicely done. I look forward to seeing the final draft!!

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  3. Max,

    I'll have to check this place out some time! You have a lot of food descriptions--but I'd be interested in knowing a little more about the restaurant and the kinds of people who go there to eat.

    The third to last paragraph (it starts "The atmosphere at La Mexicana is a familiar, humble one") seems like it would fit better if it was placed towards the beginning of your piece, where you describe the restaurant. You say here that "one doesn't come to the back of a Hispanic market looking for the atmosphere and decor of Food Dance"--so what do they come for? Maybe push these details, like Alaina suggested. What were the waiters like? I ask because I'm wondering how you can show us the restaurant was truthful without telling.

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  4. Max, this was so enjoyable to read! I really want to go to this little place now, and I feel like I have enough information to know what to expect. I like how you take us first through the different sections of the market, and then finally to the back at the restaurant. You write with an honest voice throughout, and it really works with this piece as it gives the review authority. Well done.
    I like how you mention the "unassuming decor", and show that while the atmosphere/decorations aren't super, the type of customer that frequents this place isn't necessarily looking for another Food Dance. We really get a sense of who eats at this place and what we should expect.
    I guess the only thing I would suggest is more about the waiters/waitresses, what the service was like...this is a really great start, can't wait to go to this place!!

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  5. Burritos and fajitas are probably things one can find at any Mexican restaurant, yet you do a great job of making La Mexicana a distinguished place. The food might be what one expects, but the character of the restaurant is very strong here. Despite not having many fancy decorations it is warm environment with good food, and your writing makes me want to try it some time, so nice job there!
    You slipped up once and used "I". "The steak in the fajitas is some of the best I've ever had." Because you have avoided using "I" up to this point you should probably stay consistent, but that's the only one I noticed.
    Also, I assume your audience is for the Index because you mention Food Dance. Maybe add a link to that or something? Just for those who don't know the restaurant.
    This was really fun and interesting to read. Well done!

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  6. Max

    I'm not sure if you made up the sneeze glass bit or if that's an actual saying, but I laughed out loud. I'm going to refer to it as that from now on.
    I love how you let the imagery speak for itself. The fact that the restaurant has a bottle-opener attached to the wall says so much without having to directly tell us.

    Your discriptions of the food itself sound scrumptious, but I think that may be partially because of my familiarity with Mexican food. I would have liked to hear how the avocado, onions and peppers tasted, how they worked with the meal. If they were unique to this location or if they were like every other Mexican restaurant's toppings. I also would have liked you to mention what the corn syrup is replaced with, and if it tasted any different than American sodas.

    Also, a few of your sentences were just a little stumble-y, which would be easily fixed with a bit of tightening. One other stylistic thing that I noticed was that you said the phrase 'make sure' several times in succession. Maybe try to mix this up a bit?

    Overall, this was a well constructed piece. I agree with Julia and Alaina that showing us in the end instead of summarizing would have been preferable, but I think most of your edits are minor.

    Also, really jealous there aren't a lot of veggie options. Meh.

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  7. The overall feeling of your piece was honesty. You were very helpful to potential readers, telling it straight and giving great advice. You might want to say that the streets you mention are in Kalamazoo...unless it is for the Index but even then it might be a good addition. I loved the 'glass sneeze guard' bit! You did a really good job describing the place from the spatial outline to the types of table options. You had a great sneak peak on the burrito—but it wasn’t that good? What exactly was wrong with the beans? I wasn't sure. Wow,loved the steak description and I liked your description of the sauces but did they have real names too? You have an awesome ending and a great start!

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  8. Max~ this is really colorful writing. I liked it a lot-- I would maybe put the atmosphere portion more toward the front of the piece, I found myself trying to figure out where, exactly, I was. But maybe that's too formulaic. Another thing I thought about while I was reading was that I could feel you struggling with the authenticity issue-- is there anyway to take that question out of your mind and give your voice an authority without actually having authority? -not a question for you, necessarily... kind of broad... but it's something I think would benefit this piece if answered.

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  9. this sounds like a very nice, small place restaurant. I actually tend to like smaller places, and this one sounds very nice. you do a good job of going over the authenticity and good food all while also letting the reader know what to expect, and what possibly to avoid. I think you've done a good job overall, and could perhaps put a but in there somewhere, but the restaurant sounds a little to good for one to be needed.

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  10. Max,

    Nice work! The descriptions of the food and restaurant are very informative. I also really liked that you included information to vegetarians, widening your audience. I had not thought about this aspect, and often don’t, not being one myself!

    I would have liked to see the description of the restaurant earlier on. I found it a bit distracting from the descriptions of the food because I was all the while trying to picture where you were consuming it.

    Good start, adding a bit of color to details will move it right along!

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  11. this is a very neatly organized piece, which makes it more accesible and easy to read. Even when it is split into very clearly differenciated sections you make a smooth transition bewtween them. This also allows you to dig deeper into certain aspects like the drinks (as a side note: doesn't sprite have corn syrup in it?). The conclussion also works quite well, sums up the entire piece both in content and style.

    You could incorporate a more englobing lead, an intoduction that covers the basics of the piece without giving too much away. I feel as of now the food is. omng in a little too late without this sort of introduction.

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