When first thinking about this assignment, a myriad of potential dishes ran through my head. My usual fare of mac and cheese was the first thing that came to mind and the first thing to be rejected. No, I thought, that's too usual, too Kraft for a unique meal. Next was chicken wings, something many of you now know is my culinary shangri-la. Too risky, I told myself. There's no way that anything I could make would measure up to my demanding standards. I had to have something closer to me, something I'd never had in a restaurant, something that was great enough to justify an entire meal with it as its center. Finally, I knew. Chicken piccata.
Chicken piccata was a staple of my father's cooking and one of the few dishes that I loved and requested as often as I could back at home. Soft chicken with crisp sauted breading and the important part, a lemon juice, white wine, chicken broth and caper sauce. With the chicken, my father always made a plate of sauted green beans and almond slivers in lemon juice. This aspect of the meal could prove more difficult than the chicken. I remember my father either undercooking or burning the almonds at least three times before he managed to get the dish just right. I figured that the delicacy needed to perfect the almonds along with the green beans would be too much for my novice cooking abilities and so I opted out of the finicky almonds.
Now that I had my meal, I needed a person (or a few people) to share it with. I thought and thought and, after realizing that the majority of my friends were vegetarian, decided on my close friend Ethan. After spending nine months in Israel together and sharing countless teenager-cooked meals together there, I figured he would be the most receptive to my culinary excursion from Kraft noodles and bagels with cream cheese. Another bonus; Ethan will almost never pass up a free meal.
Procuring the ingredients for my meal was a relatively simple task but one nonetheless fraught with tension. Most of the ingredients were simple; chicken, oil, beans, lemons, eggs. The problems came when I ticked “chicken” off of my grocery list and came to bread crumbs and capers. The amounts of these two ingredients that my recipe called for were miniscule in comparison to the bountiful containers in the supermarket. My brow furrowed when I realized I'd have to pay five dollars to use a tenth of both the container of bread crumbs and capers. What college student uses capers in any kind of meal? Oy vey. Sighing deeply at my frugality, I purchased both and hoped that I'd find some way to enjoy eating breaded capers in the near future.
With all the ingredients assembled, it was time to start cooking. A few days earlier I had asked my dad to send me the recipe for his chicken piccata and he obliged, sending me the scanned page of “Dad's Own Cookbook,” complete with his written notes about variations on the dish and when to pound the chicken. Thinking ahead, I had defrosted the chicken in the fridge for about half a day before I started cooking my meal. When it came time to pull it out of the fridge and begin the long process of readying it for cooking, it was still a little frosted. I ended up letting it sit out for another couple of hours before undertaking the first step in creating chicken piccata, pounding. After wrapping the chicken in cellophane, I laid into it with a rolling pin, flattening it to about half its former thickness. According to my father, this was so that it cooked faster. I just had fun taking some of my sixth-week blues out on a piece of inanimate meat. Next, I “dredged” the pieces of chicken in beaten eggs and then breadcrumbs. At this point the chicken seemed pretty gross. Just slimy pink meat with crust of bread crumbs. Well, I thought, the only thing to do is throw them in the pan and see what happens. As the breasts sizzled in the frying pan, a wonderful cooked chicken aroma mixed with the heartiness of frying bread crumbs and olive oil filled the air. Yum! Things were going according to plan.
When both breasts had turned a golden brown, I took them out of the pan and poured my pre-prepared mixture of capers, chicken broth, white wine, and lemon juice into the same pan to cook down for around ten minutes. From my experience, this sauce is what really makes the whole dish come together. The sourness and cooked down chicken flavor work amazingly with the soft yet crunchy chicken breasts. The best part is near the end of the meal when all the sauce has been absorbed by the breadcrumbs and your last few bites of chicken have the whole shebang together inside them.
I did hit a snag with the sauce. The directions say that you're only supposed to cook the mixture down for 45 seconds, but after those 45 seconds my sauce hadn't achieved the strongly-scented brown thickness that I remembered from my father's piccata. I decided to cook it down for another five minutes but I had to add more of all the ingredients in the sauce so that I'd still have enough sauce after everything cooked down.
Where have the green beans been this whole time you ask? Boiling in a pot that I had prepared at the beginning of the meal. After they boiled for around five minutes I took them out, and delegated the rest of their process to Ethan because I was busy with the sauce. He strained them, washed them in cold water, and cooked them in a pan with butter. As the sauce finished, we juiced half a lemon on top of them and moved the whole meal out to the living room to finally be consumed.
The chicken was wonderful despite some slight differences from what I was used too. My father either bought smaller breasts than I did or cut the ones he had in half, but our servings were gigantic. I'm not sure how, but the chicken was cooked perfectly through even though I wasn't watching them very carefully when I was dashing around the kitchen. The sauce was great too, very lemony. It really deepened my enjoyment of the chicken. The green beans' sweetness and crunch was a perfect compliment to the soft chicken and the tart lemon in the sauce and the beans. I couldn't get many specifics out of Ethan but he said that he really enjoyed the whole meal.
The only problems we had were slight. The sauce could have been thicker and less lemony, the breasts could have been thinner or more manageable, and the chicken had cooled by the time we had finished cooking our green beans and sauce. Also, there was a lot of lemon in our meal. I'm totally fine with this and even enjoyed all the tartness, but I'm not sure how the whole meal would go over with someone who doesn't love lemon as much as I do.
With the chicken safely in our bellies, we turned to the monumental task of doing the mountain of dishes that amassed during the frantic scramble to cook one of my favorite meal. My dad's notes written on the recipe page and the texture and appearance of the breaded chicken brought me back home again, at least for one night.
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Max, I really loved reading this. Your piece flows so smoothly, and your writing is very colloquial--I can hear your voice in it.
ReplyDeleteI think the structure works very well, starting with your contemplation of the meal, to the cooking, and finally to the enjoyment of eating the food you prepared. Your incorporation of humor and detail throughout was excellent.
It was nice to see details of Ethan, for example, that he would almost never pass up a free meal. The only other times he enters the piece, though, are in the cooking of the green beans and the final tasting. I found myself wanting more of his character, if that's possible.
The other things to be changed that I can see are easy fixes. In the beginning in the paragraph where you're talking about your dad's recipe the word 'almonds' gets a bit repetitive. I, too, felt like there was a lot of lemon going on towards the end. I'm not sure if this repetition can be fixed without sacrificing your description, but it's something to be aware of. This was a very enjoyable read, Max.
Hi Max~
ReplyDeleteYou did description very well in this piece: the description of the process and of the food itself is very strong and helped it flow--it was a driving force. As you're looking at it, I did want to see more comparison between this and the food you're used to making... or maybe more of the tension between being at K and home... those are things you touch on a little at the beginning and end of the piece, and if they were to come out more I think it would lend something substantial to your already-strong work... just suggestions? Also: This all sound wonderful.
Nice job, Max. You have great descriptions—just curious, does “piccata” mean something in a different language? Does it fall under a certain ethnic cuisine? (Ok, so now I see in the recipe that it's Italian, but perhaps you could include that in the actual piece?).
ReplyDeleteIn the first half, I really like how you go through your decision-making process and then explain to readers the significance behind the specific dish you chose to make. I kind of wanted you to talk more about the notes your dad wrote on the recipe page—did they help you? Did you follow them? You also mention these notes in the very last sentence—so could you share them with the reader? Or maybe instead, you could use it to talk more about your dad—did he cook a lot? Was he constantly writing variations for recipes? Or was it just for this particular dish?
One other thing—I know what the “sixth-week blues” are, but I don’t think an outsider would—is there a way to make that more clear?
This is such a fantastic first draft! I could really hear your voice throughout the entire piece, and even though you couldn't get much out of Ethan I think you did a good job with character development. I like how you compared your version of Chicken Piccata on so many levels to your dad's version -- you went through each detail of the dish that differed in either good or bad ways, and I think this definitely added a great element to the connection between you and your dad. Maybe you even include a bit more about your dad somewhere for more character development? How did he influence your food decisions/how has your relationship changed..?
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of letting the humor flow out of your various mishaps in this process; the overall tone is light and humorous, never stressful or really frustrated. Great first draft!
Heya Max.
ReplyDeleteI liked coming home to the smell of lemon. Thanks for that.
You did a really marvelous job with the description of the preparation of the meal. I think its really hard to describe a process, especially creatively, and you did it very nicely.
However, it seemed like there was a lot more here than just the process of making the meal, and I kept thinking I was going to hear more about that. I would've liked to hear more about the communication between you and your father. Was he excited that your perfect meal was inspired by one he's been making for you since childhood? Did he give you any pointers, any warnings? Also, as someone who knows Ethan pretty well, I would've liked to hear more about him as a character. I'm sure he was messing around while you were cooking, or eating all my nutella. I think he'd give you some really fantastic character description to work with.
Overall, really complete, well thought-out piece. I'm excited to see where you go with it.
Mmm, i might have to see about making that sometime, it sounds downright amazing! The tone of this piece is really good, it's causal and fun, and helps the piece as a whole move on from part to part. i also really liked the description of the meal itself, and how you cooked it. Only thing i could think to add would be to perhaps add a little more interaction between you and your friend, though it's not a necessity.
ReplyDeleteI really like what you've got going with this first draft. I love the colloquial feel but I don't think the audience is supposed to know what the assignment--just a technicality. Your descriptions are great and I enjoyed your explanation of how you choose to make the dish you did. I was surprised that chicken wings would be harder to make though. I would have liked to see more of your relationship with Ethan. While you were describing the cooking I wasn't aware that he was helping until about half way through. You have a really great start!
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ReplyDeleteI loved reading about your meal! I think it was great that you chose to make something that reminded you of your dad and of being home. And I give you mad props for actually attempting it! There are a lot of delicious dishes my mom makes that I would be all to scared to try. Kudos to you. I really enjoyed reading your descriptions of both the food prep and of the actual meal. I think you were able to take the reader through each step nicely without over doing it. One suggestion I have would be to perhaps incorporate a little more about the experience of eating chicken piccata at home throughout your piece. Maybe when you talk about how you did something, relate it to how your father would do it, or something along those lines. Also, I had no idea what chicken piccata was before reading your piece. Perhaps you could include a photo or two? Wonderful work!
Max,
ReplyDeleteI like the beginning of your piece when you are describing the process you underwent in deciding what to cook. I also went through a similar process, yet still opted for a fairly stereotypical college meal. This added to your piece for me because it caused me to reflect on my own experience. Kudos to you for picking a more challenging meal!
I really enjoyed the image of you pounding away at some meat with a hammer, taking out all the frustration of our ever present work load. I wish I could have joined you!
I was struck with your description of the raw meat. Maybe when talking about the grossness of the pink meat, you might also add the danger of consuming raw chicken or raw egg. Both of these foods could cause illness. This came to my mind when reading about your disgust with the meat’s appearance, anyway!
I’m glad that the meal turned out a success for you Max! I think it’s awesome that you felt that your meal was even better than your fathers. Maybe you could play this up a little more in your final draft.
The only other suggestion I would make is that in the last few paragraphs, you talk a lot about how lemony the meal was, and how this may or may not have been a good thing. Your first mention of the taste though is when saying that the sauce was great, very lemony. This is a bit contradictory.
Great work!
I agree with Hannah that I think there's more here than just cooking the meal. When you write that you spent 9 months with Ethan in Israel I was like "Woah, that's so cool!" I would love to read more about that relationship and if relevant, an experience with food you had abroad with him (is he a K student, btw?) You do a great job in describing your meal and the process of making it, but I think along the way you might consider touching on your surroundings like Hannah sort of says. I hear your voice come out a lot in your little spouts of humor throughout, and I would love to see more of that during the long description of the food. I really enjoyed reading this...nice work, Max!
ReplyDeleteReally nice job Max! I enjoyed reading this very much!
ReplyDeleteAs people have already mentioned, developing Ethan's character more would add something to the piece. I realize it's sometimes hard to write about close friends (at least it is for me for some reason) and also you don't want to take the focus away from the meal itself, but since he helped make it and ate it with you he should probably show up a little bit more. Maybe throw some quotes in there is you remember any?
I also want to hear a little more about your dad, since this is his recipe. Especially since your last line (also one of my favorites) references your dad and being transported back home for just one night. Maybe you can develop this idea more.